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Arielle your stories are so good both Tears and Crown are amazing. I know Tears is your priority but Crown has so much promise. Not sure what I like playing better a mute or blind protagonist. Please keep up the good work.

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Oh stop, you're going to make me blush. ๐Ÿ˜Š You're right, Adoriel's Tears is my priority, but I can't wait to get back to Heavy when the time comes. I've got lots of ideas to explore! ๐Ÿค“

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Hello Arielle, how are you? I hope nothing bad has happened to you. Please take care, stay safe and hydrated โค๏ธ 

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Hi dear ! 

I'm fine ! I've just resumed writing after an enforced break and I'm mainly working on my first project Adoriel's Tears. 


Thank you for asking about me. ๐Ÿฅฐ

Ah, good to know, I'm glad you are still working on your other story :D and anytime, I hope you take care of yourself, stay safe and hydrated <3

Slight bug. You can't actually change between light and dark mode. It acts like it will drop down the options, then doesn't and freezes up the menu a bit.

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This is so unique. I loveeee the different adaptions or interpretations of Arthurs story. I think i follow about 2 other creators with different takes or inspiration from it. So it's wonderful to find another gem. This was so good and i love the ROs. It'll be interesting to see what happens when you romance Arthur while Guinevere is like ๐Ÿ‘€๐Ÿ‘€๐Ÿ‘€๐Ÿ‘€ so that has my chaotic self intrigued.


Edit: read it again and I was so sad when it ended. Especially noting that English isn't your first language this makes it even more impressive. I thought I loved the other story you posted but this one is now my first love. You really are a talented writer. 

Thank you! 

Adoriel's Tears is actually my first story and Heavy is the Crown my second. Switching from one to the other keeps me interested. I'm glad you like both, it means you'll be twice as happy when I update. 

Romancing Arthur will indeed be interesting, as Gwen's loyalty to him is very strong. 

I love the fact you included disabilities. Interesting to read an MC who signs. Great so far. 

Thank you ! ๐Ÿ˜Š

I adore the family the MC has. Tho I find it... Unsettling with what this tradition they follow. All that responsibility and expectations sound stressful, is what I'm feeling. So all of that means I am heavily intrigued! 

Thank you ! I'm glad you're intrigued ! It's very stressful indeed, and not just for Mc. But with great power comes great responsibility, right?

how old are we in the story? And also the character and codex page has no return button and the back button doesn't seem to work too. But aside from that I'm really enjoying the story so far.

Mc to ten years in the prologue, then there will be an elipse. The codex and other problems will be solved in the next update.

I'm glad you like the story.

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oh my goodness, that's such an amazing game and I love it so much (one of my favourites <3) the characters are all so cute (especially our sword and the other sweet cousins :D and it's interesting to be mute, deaf or blind. thank you so much for making this story, I'm looking forward to the next update <3

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I was in the middle of writing when I saw a notification arrive! Thanks for taking a look at my story. I hope you will enjoy the next update just as much as what you've already read ๐Ÿ˜Š

Hi, Super exhilarated for the itch release.

I just discovered an error pertaining to the character sheet. Once the game loads and you click the element to open the sheet, you are unable to exit unless you restart the game.

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Hi! 

I'm glad you like the twine version. I'll look into how to fix this error as soon as possible. Thanks for pointing it out.