Doesn't matter if choose Arthur's memory or main story, an error appears and cannot continue. And in barn when accept Arthur's help can't continue too.
Charming and emotionally heavy story. The reader can easily relate to child MC through the struggles and the need to rebel against their mother's overprotectiveness and need to prove herself as a better mother than her own mother, who means well, yet is almost suffocating them.
In spite of that, she remains one of my favorite characters due to how complex her character is. I love how she never reveals her fears and vulnerabilities whenever MC is around, putting up a strong front so her child always feels safe.
I think there is an error in the scene where you choose if you exited to see Arthur or that you hate him. I selected the one where I decided to hate him, and an error came.
I enjoyed the update. It was nice getting to know our cute tiny MC better and for me being a bit cheeky with his personality. Aswell as getting to know his family. The cliffhanger was crazy. Exciteddd for more. Oh and have a great weekend ♥️
Lovely demo! for starters the colors are beautiful and lovely, secondly, I love the game so far and can't wait to see what comes next! it may be short but it most certainly drew me in quite fast haha!
Just now got around to playing the update! It's wonderful! I enjoyed getting to play as the mc and get to experience them for a bit longer! Not to sound repetitive or anything but I definitely enjoy your work!
Okay, so! Honestly, I do not comment games or other IFs whatsoever, even if I played and read a lot of them, this will be my first comment on itch.io, and I wished to tell you, author, that this story has great potential, and I NEED to see what happens next. Also yes, everything looks really pretty. I wish you great luck not only with this IF, but with your other present or future projects as well.
This was wonderful really. So short yet so descriptive. I really got pulled into the demo. It's very well written really honestly it is soo gooood. I love the colors and how options are presented. It looks really pretty.
I am very excited for it. I don't think I've read anything like it tho with all the characters it's giving LOTR vibes and I ain't mad at it.
Good luck with the writing. Tho it seems you don't need it with a start like this. ♥️
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nice game dev please keep working on it its awesome and i wish to see more of i
hi! is this supposed to be the end of the current demo? i can't progress from this passage </3
either way i'm really liking the game so far! the story is rlly interesting! :D
Doesn't matter if choose Arthur's memory or main story, an error appears and cannot continue. And in barn when accept Arthur's help can't continue too.
Hi dear ! Did you have a good or bad relationship with Arthur for begin with ? :)
Hello! Good ofcourse, because Arthur so sweet and i don't have a heart to hate him haha
Thank you ! Will look into it. Then try to restart the game. Using an old save can be a problem :)
Your welcome, and thank you for your hard work. Good luck with bugs and writing, i'll be waiting for Corden and S ♥️
You can try again if you want :)
Charming and emotionally heavy story. The reader can easily relate to child MC through the struggles and the need to rebel against their mother's overprotectiveness and need to prove herself as a better mother than her own mother, who means well, yet is almost suffocating them.
In spite of that, she remains one of my favorite characters due to how complex her character is. I love how she never reveals her fears and vulnerabilities whenever MC is around, putting up a strong front so her child always feels safe.
I think there is an error in the scene where you choose if you exited to see Arthur or that you hate him. I selected the one where I decided to hate him, and an error came.
PS: love your story
Hi ! It's fixed thanks for letting me know ! :)
I enjoyed the update. It was nice getting to know our cute tiny MC better and for me being a bit cheeky with his personality. Aswell as getting to know his family. The cliffhanger was crazy. Exciteddd for more. Oh and have a great weekend ♥️
There will be even more opportunities to be cheeky in the future.
I'm glad you liked the update and the demo.
Have a nice weekend 💕
i loved the storyline ^^
Thank you ! 😊
ur welcome ^^
Lovely demo! for starters the colors are beautiful and lovely, secondly, I love the game so far and can't wait to see what comes next! it may be short but it most certainly drew me in quite fast haha!
Hi !!
You won't have to wait long, as I've just updated the game. I hope you enjoy what happens next, thanks for reading.
Just now got around to playing the update! It's wonderful! I enjoyed getting to play as the mc and get to experience them for a bit longer! Not to sound repetitive or anything but I definitely enjoy your work!
Okay, so! Honestly, I do not comment games or other IFs whatsoever, even if I played and read a lot of them, this will be my first comment on itch.io, and I wished to tell you, author, that this story has great potential, and I NEED to see what happens next. Also yes, everything looks really pretty. I wish you great luck not only with this IF, but with your other present or future projects as well.
Oh thank you so much for taking the time to comment, it means so much to me as it's the first time you've done so. I hope you will enjoy the rest.
This was wonderful really. So short yet so descriptive. I really got pulled into the demo. It's very well written really honestly it is soo gooood. I love the colors and how options are presented. It looks really pretty.
I am very excited for it. I don't think I've read anything like it tho with all the characters it's giving LOTR vibes and I ain't mad at it.
Good luck with the writing. Tho it seems you don't need it with a start like this. ♥️
Thank you very much for your compliments. Concerning the fonts, if you go to the settings you can choose another size and another font.
I hope that helps.
I saw that. Goes to show how blind my dumbass is lol thank u and honestly i reaaaally do like the story. Hope you have a wonderful week ahead ♥️